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发表于 2017-11-8 15:01:33 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 Sehlk 于 2017-11-8 15:01 编辑

剧本是由小马国科学院工作组 (EIS Studio)成员合作编写,主要作者包括Horizon, Theta和Humphrey(本人)。由Humphrey所编写部分所有相关权益已转让给Allyson Driscoll。目前暂无中文或翻译版本(我们正在找人但貌似目前还没找到合适人选,我自己尽量翻译好了)Sorry


虽然作为同人作品,但剧不免有违背官方设定部分,敬请谅解


世界设定:
一万年前(官方故事发生的10^n年之后),小马和Furry在一片星区组建了一个星际联合国(United Nation of Equestria,UNE),主要人口为三种小马(70%)和少数Furry种族(狐狸,狼,蝙蝠,大猫等,占30%)。 随着时间的流逝小马如何来到这片星区的历史已被淡忘。最早的记录显示小马和各路Furry在一万年前签订协议,合并为一个国家,UNE,以寻求共同发展。随后几百年中,政府在一个资源丰富的小行星带建立了小马国科学院以促进科技与工程的进步。 数年前,小马国科学院新建一座大型造船厂,并开发出小马国第一艘专业科考星舰 测地线号ESV. Geodesic。
人物设定:
第一集主要人物:
Thunder Flare:

种族:天马 (棕色体毛,红色鬃毛)
职业:测地线号船员

Sivath Flare:

种族:半机械独角兽
职业:历史心理学教授(参见基地系列)

Shuckle:

种族:吸血蝙蝠小马 Vampire bat pone(由于分级考虑,剧情里并不吸血,也不吃小马)
职业:科学院医学院助教,命运号驻舰护士

Alastair:

种族:蝙蝠兽人 Furry bat
职业:测地线号舰长,命运号舰长


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 楼主| 发表于 2017-11-8 15:01:34 | 显示全部楼层
SCENE1 ESV. GEODESIC

Professor stands on a stage giving his historical speech

PROFESSOR
Ten thousand cosmic years ago, our predecessors gathered in this asteroid field, from different worlds. They established a common ground of the ultimate power, knowledge. Pursuing this power to benefit all kinds, this Institute was funded by our great Nation. For generations, we have charted the stars, studied the atoms, just in here, this asteroid field.
Some of us may have travelled light years away, orbiting stars or surveying planets. With small transport vessels and limited equipment, they worked hard, yet gained little. Today, that is about to change, thanks to our proud scientists and engineers.
Now I present you our leading Science Vessel, the first one of her class, Institute Construction Contract 4101, Equestria Science Vessel Geodesic. Its name, taken from a concept of Shortest path of the Space Time Continuum, symbolizes the Creation of this Institute of ours.

Professor raises his head

PROFESSOR
Mainframe, transfer command of the Geodesic to Captain Professor Alastair. The Ship is yours.

Cut to: Bridge


Professor Alastair stands up from the seat



ALASTAIR
Engineering, report status.

Cut to: Engineering deck, warp core control room

CHIEF ENGINEER
Engineering to Bridge, the antimatter reactor is stable, impulse engines and warp drives are ready, field generators and shields are online. We have a green across the board, all systems go. The ship is prepared, sir.

SMASH CUT: Back to Bridge

ALASTAIR
Helms?

NAVIGATOR
Course laid in, sir.

ALASTAIR
Engage.

PROFESSOR
(Voice only, through the Geodesic's communications)
Professor Alastair, Godspeed.

fade to: the outside
Ship moves clear the dock and jumps to warp

SCENE 2 JUST A RANDOM DAY
Alastair sits on the bridge commanding the ESV. Geodesic. An incoming message from astrometric lab displays on the front holoscreen.

COMPUTER
Incoming message from astrometric lab.

ALASTAIR
On screen.

Researcher Pawwy stands in front of a console, reporting his new finding.

PAWWY
Astrometric lab to Bridge. Captain, I'm detecting an unidentified object at high sub-light speed.

ALASTAIR
Hm...

Pawwy
Well, Captain, the object wasn't there before. it just appear in the sensor a few minutes ago... I've never seen anything like that... It's glowing red light as a star but accounting for its recession velocity, it's emitting super-charged photons. I think we need to bring the ship closer to investigate this... object.

ALASTAIR
Permission granted. Helms,reset course.

Ship turns 90 degrees starboard and jumps into warp.
The ship jumps out of warp at a point and continue flies at high impulse speed.
Pawwy works in the lab, calculating the data. She looks up and presses the communication button on the wall.

PAWWY
Captain, I am receiving some kind of transmission from the object. Seems to be binary code carried by radio wave...
(Pause, and knocking on keyboard)
Decoding...
(buttons beeping)
Captain, the signal is corrupted, the translator can only translate a few words.

ALASTAIR
What is it?

PAWWY
It seems to be a distress signal. Planet dying, need help. Something like that...

ALASTAIR
Which planet?

PAWWY
Sorry captain, but the data is corrupted. But I believe if we can capture the object we might be able to decipher the message.
(hesitates)
Captain, request to bring the object aboard.

ALASTAIR
Permission granted. Lieutenant Flare

THUNDER FLARE
Yes, Captain.

ALASTAIR
Professor A (名字还没定下来 orz)

Professor A
Aye.

ALASTAIR
get your teams ready in hanger bay and assist Professor Pawwy.

Thunder and prof A stand up from their posts and walk out.
FADE OUT
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发表于 2017-11-9 04:31:48 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
看了一遍......首先基地里面的职业叫做心灵历史学,不是历史心理学。剧情只能说很平庸,版权什么的完全可以放放,小马的剧本冷门到没人会盗的。英语的表达能力已经达到fimfiction的水平了,可以拿来给其他的吧友做英语练习......但是任何的出版物和剧本都要考虑读者/观众的,一部小马的舞台剧,目标受众是谁?现在的小马同人剧本唯一的受众就是那些有幸在学校里当上编剧的马迷,你到好,搞个纯架空的世界观,谁会要啊?你还真以为会有做动画的大佬看上这种剧本吗?真要吸引别人做动画就去写分镜,不然你的剧本在fimfiction的高分作品面前没有任何的竞争力。有空干嘛不去把a brony tale成舞台剧
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发表于 2017-11-10 23:49:12 | 显示全部楼层
不如译成中文?????貌似英文太多了
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 楼主| 发表于 2017-11-14 23:58:33 | 显示全部楼层
斯凯森 发表于 2017-11-9 04:31
看了一遍......首先基地里面的职业叫做心灵历史学,不是历史心理学。剧情只能说很平庸,版权什么的完全可以 ...

这个剧本实际上是自己用的。。。我们正在进行动画的制作:3
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 楼主| 发表于 2017-11-15 00:02:29 | 显示全部楼层
迷茫的学生马迷 发表于 2017-11-10 23:49
不如译成中文?????貌似英文太多了

怕语文水平不够,自己不敢翻译qwq,而目前还没找到合适的人。。。
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 楼主| 发表于 2017-11-16 03:27:14 | 显示全部楼层
SCENE 3 RETRIEVAL
In the hanger bay control room, Thunder is operating the tractor beam control. Pawwy, Professor A and a group of redshirts are standing by.

THUNDER FLARE
Locking in 3, 2, 1...

Thunder's hoof tapping on the panel. A tractor beam shoots from a device in hanger bay and locks on the probe, before the ship starts shaking. Alarms go off throughout the entire ship.

THUNDER FLARE
(Shouting)
Bridge, Increase speed by 7.38 kps, The probe is coming too fast...

ALASTAIR
(Through the COM)
Affirmative.

The ship is gradually stabilized. A Probe is carefully towed into the hanger bay. It's solar sail has already damaged and retracted.
The two on-board inspector walks in the hanger control room.

INSPECTOR B
What was that?

THUNDER FLARE
(bows)
It was the probe, sir. It was coming too fast, but everything is under control now, sir.

INSPECTOR A
Why risk the ship for the probe?

PAWWY
A distress probe it is, Sir. It's transmitter is damaged we need to take it on board to retrieve the complete message.

INSPECTOR A
Alright then.

Pawwy opens the door to hanger and walks to the probe with Professor A. They examine it with a tricorder.

PROFESSOR A
Intriguing design. Never seen something like that, but the tech..

Professor A taps his badge.

PROFESSOR A
Sivath, this is A. I need your help down here.

Sivath Walks in. He is a cyborg pone, with most of his body parts replaced by implants.
PAWWY
(Shows Sivath his tricorder)
Hey, come look at this.

CUT TO: CONTROL ROOM

INSPECTOR B
What is the psycho-historian doing here?

THUNDER FLARE
(Stares at Sivath in the hanger affectionately)
Cause he knows everything a lil bit... I guess...
Inspector B sighs​.

SCENE 4 Discovery
Sivath holds a tricorder, scanning a piece of device laid on an anti-gravity cart. He pulses a second and pushes a button on another console.

SIVATH FLARE
Sivath to Thunder, I need you in the lab at once.

Thunder Flare is taking a break in the mess hall, joking with his colleagues. Hearing Sivath's call, he puts down his coffee cup.

THUNDER FLARE
Coming, love.

SIVATH FLARE
*Sigh* I told you to call me my name or "professor" at work.

THUNDER FLARE
(sarcastic)
Yes, Sir!

Thunder Flare walks through the door, smiles at Sivath, the Borg. Sivath nods to him, letting him in the lab. Other scientists are busy on their own researches on different consoles.

SIVATH FLARE
Thunder, what do you know about our history?

THUNDER FLARE
Well, as much as you know. We met in the archaeology site on Twilight-4, where you accidentally fell into a...
(Interrupted)

SIVATH FLARE
Oh, no...no, no. I meant the origin of our United Nation o' Equestria.

THUNDER FLARE
(Sarcastic)
Oh dear, That's on history 101. Why would our omniscient professor ask that?

Sivath sighs, pointing his hoof on the screen.

SIVATH FLARE
Because if I am not mistaken, everything we know is about to change.

Fade OUT

SCENE 5 Historical record
Princess Twilight Sparkle sits in front of the camera. The background is the Element of Harmony banner.

TWILIGHT SPARKLE
This is Princess Twilight Sparkle of the Republic of Equestria.

Twilight pauses a bit, looks away from the camera, nods to someone, then turns back to the recorder.

TWILIGHT SPARKLE
Roughly a millennium ago, we started to explore the true nature of our power, what we used to refer as Magic.

DISSOLVE TO some clips from MLP

TWILIGHT SPARKLE
Magic gives unicorns abilities of telekinetic, shielding, teleportation and other capabilities... Princess Celestia and Luna, the two most powerful alicorns in Equestria, were the ruler of our nation at that time. I studied magic from Princess Celestia, and discovered a new type of magic, the Magic of Friendship.

DISSOLVE back to Twilight

TWILIGHT SPARKLE
Sounds superstitious right?
(chuckles)
Yeah...
At the same time, some ponies started another approach of understanding of our world, science. Lead by an earth pony called the doctor, ponies started to learn the world beyond magic.
Why would an object unaffected by Magic fall down to the ground, why would boats float on the water even without the help of magic, why a metal pillar without magic reinforcement will buckle under certain load...

Twilight takes a sip of water from a cup

FADE TO a series of short records

An Airplane taking off; ponies defeat a creature with cannons and missiles; an earth pony with a wonder bolt power armor takes off with help of a jet pack.


TWILIGHT SPARKLE
Well, through the study of science and technology, we build machines allowing everypony to fly, them defending themselves, and giving them super-strength...

CUT TO: Twilight

TWILIGHT SPARKLE
However, with all those fancy inventions, the power harnessed from science is still no match for magic. two hundred years ago, with the development of quantum mechanics and nanotechnology, we discovered that the magic is actually na...
(Interrupted by statics)

The message is disrupted by interference.
The screen is filled with statics, then transforms into a console display in the lab.

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发表于 2017-11-18 13:37:20 | 显示全部楼层
可以先机翻一下XD
大电影快上映了lolololol
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发表于 2017-11-24 21:58:40 | 显示全部楼层
xx,机器翻译还是够靠谱(百度翻译),有一部分就要手工了(因为是直译)
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发表于 2017-12-3 05:28:17 | 显示全部楼层
我梦想(妄想)我正在写的绘图引擎MicroEngine可以用来做这个动画……
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